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Thursday 7 July 2016

as i see it

Planning a Short Story
Walt: plan stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Character
Invinsible man
                   Cant get hurt
                    Cant die
                      Can turn into a elemental dragon and can make dragons
Super speed
Setting
town
Problem
Death spreads  poisonous gas and everyone gets sick


Orientation
(Beginning)
Problem
(Middle)
Resolution
(End)
Invisible man was a scientist
And he was doing and experiment he tested and ant to be invinsible and the ant bites invinsible man
Death spreads the poisonous
Across the whole city and invisinsible man needs to save them
Death gets blasted off to another planet


Once upon a time there lived a scientist.His name was Adam.Adam was a very good scientist.He got paid a lot of money.

So one day Adam done an experiment about I
invinsinbillity.He tried it on an ant to see if it will work then soon after the experiment the ant bit Adam. Adam got Knocked out and he went to the sickbay.It was so soon till Adam woke up.When Adam woke up he said to himself ‘’what is great power I can feel  it’’.Adam went home just like the wind.He watched the news and it said ‘’breaking news on live tv there is a poisounous gas spreading over the city and people are getting sick thee were stuff splashing cars exploding people caughing like Boom, smash, bang, ting,crack,bam.So then after that Adam went down to the city to see what was wrong and there he saw  the gas.The gas was coming right towards Adam.Adam couldnt control his body his body ran wright threw the gas with out no hassel.But Adam wanted to go back.He still coudnt control his body.But his body was leading to a man Adam said ‘’hello are you alright’’and the man said ‘’back im more fine then you could possibly look’’.Adam said ‘’im alright’’.So the man turns back and says ‘’what how ant you sick’’.So Adam said ‘’your the one making everyone sick’’.The man said ‘’yep thats right im the evilest person in the whole world’’. Adam made a random elemental dragon come out of his hands and the evil man jumped up and dodged the dragon and he squirt out gas, as he  squirted out his gas he said ‘’my name is death’’.’’I'm the evilest villain on this planet’’.Adam replied ‘’well that evilest villain will blast off to outer space’’.Adam made another elemental dragon but the dragon hit death and took him outer of space.But Adam still had to save the people from getting sick.Adam sent long long elemental dragons to save the people,Adam said they will take care of it.The dragons took the sick  people to the hospitals and Adam ran his house and Adam lived happily ever after.




 




The end

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