Space writing

I am living in earth but it's getting destroyed because there is no plants.The reason is there is no bees in the planet so we got three years to think of a different planet.Which planet should we got to.I would happily possibly go mercury.I do not know but in my research there is a bit of land that looks safe.

The problem though is that there is aliens I do not know whether they're safe or not but I think that is very cool.It kind of looks safe enough but there's only one way to find out we have to try and be friends. Sooner he told me his name it was GG so then I told him my name it is Jason.Please to meet you Jason I was wondering if you could help me fix our planet earth or find another planet.I am on a top mission trying to find out what is causing it. I think it is cause the bees are dying and no one really cares.NRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNRrrrrrrrrrrrr PSHHHHH.who is this Intruder gg He is my’’ friend’’ friend ‘’yes’’I just met him he is really nice he is trying to find another planet to stay.I do not care This human being is so ugly.Where are you from who has sent you I am from planet earth and my planet is dying and  we are trying to find another planet.Well guess what you are in luck we got the right planet for you It is called mercury it is similar to your very own planet we have food just like you let me introduce the city to you here I will come and show you around so later he saw the rest of the town but the town kept on giving him evil looks and licking faces.Your dinner boy,a family said.Task description we are learning about space and so we wanted to write a narrative.Walt: structure a narrative piece of writing. 

Later that night when Jason went sleep he had been kidnapped he did not know who these people were he had a black bag over him and rope tied around him.He heard boiling water he thought to himself what could that be.Am I possibly going to be boiled From these pesky things.They took the bag of Jason's head.You again But why Ahh der cause you look tasty nice.Were having you for dinner and that's that.

Any last words before we chop you into 100 pieces ohhhh mummy I will have the head and I will have the legs fair enough.Wyaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhn Boom! Goes the cannon how did you know we were here because I know where every house is in this town It is not that big.But when we saw the lady she said she wanted you for dinner so we then came to your room to check on you and you weren't there so then the only place you should be is in a boiling pot.So then they had admit there fault and they said they were sorry and they will never do it again so later the whole world came in to a jet and they went to mercury and they lived happily ever after.

We can now live on this planet Thanks to our hero Jason all hail Jason.Thank you Thank you everyone.we will now live happy.

technology

walt show how the maoris use to use there technology.Task description Technology is changing and changing over time and its good now 

maori fishing

Walt synthesise information from across multiple texts.Task description make these very good and detailed

past and present

2 Kids separated by 100’s of years in time. One from the past, one from the present. Compare how different travelling to a new country would be for them and their families.

Afu

Terry

Year 1217

Year 2017

If Afu and his family were going to be travelling to New Zealand.

If me and my family were going to be travelling to Samoa.

Describe what kind of vessel Afu and his family would use to travel. Be detailed.

• A nice wooden waka with a great white sail.

How long will the journey likely take?

• 8 days less

What would he probably do during the trip?

• Walking navigating and eating

Describe what kind of vessel you and your family would use to travel. Be detailed.

• A good cumfy nice airplane.

How long will the journey likely take?

• 2 hours

What would you probably do during the trip?

• Watching movies eating getting served playing games.

Walt: think critically about what we read.Task description we are learning what transport the Marios used to use and what people use now.

Now thats thinking

Hi guys back usual now it's time for Term 2.Now this time were learning about what technology the Maori’s use to back in the days. Im really looking forward to it.

Our school topic is Now that's thinking.Team 1 is learning about kites.Team 2 is similar but They're also learning about Matariki.Team 3 is just copying both of them. Were learning Team 4 about old technology .Lucky last Team 5 was learning about fixing things.

Team 4 always has the best learning no matter the cost.Our movie seemed cool so I guess our learning will be fun.Our movie was about what kind of technology was the old people doing back in the days and how they would resist.

I wasn't looking forward to this topic this term.I was hoping to see the dinosaurs at the museum and other old living creatures.The reason why is because dinosaurs are cool and are very describable and they look awesome.

What I think about our topic 1 to 10 ill rate it as a 5 average.I think its not bad cause it sound kind of catchy.All the prefects and the principal always make the school themes.They always are cool.

Native bird writing

Wouldn’t you like more Native birds than non native birds?I really want you guys to look after these little fellas so we can have more trees.We need these guys for pollution.

Some birds like Tui need to be around this area don’t you think.We need more of these birds around this area Tamaki.But if we look after them,they might come around here.

Hey guys would you like more birds yes or no.The reason why is cause we need more native birds around our community so we can have more trees and live our life here the best that we can.I really do want a couple of these birds But I really want a bellbird lets see what you feel about these birds.

Man these non native birds to gap it otherwise our native birds will be killed.We need these guys like New Zealand falcons to fly where they came from.We need way way less of these non native birds.

I feel like this whole thing needs to be rearranged.We just need more and more birds.We need to live life.

WALT: write persuasively.      Task description;We need more birds in our community Tamaki.

Fast food maths

Worms

Have you ever eaten chicken flavoured worms?> Well Mr Goodwin is insane so he would give us worms, because he might of had a bit of too much coffee,But he still is the best teacher.> I did not no this was going to happen.

Walt: write quality introductions.

Introduction Rubric
	1	2	3	4
Hook	My introduction is boring. It is difficult to read.	My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.	My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.	When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation	My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.	My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.	My audience is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task description Well yeah it does feel cool trying out new things maybe you should try out new things.
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