Walt: organise our ideas into a series of paragraphs.
Have you ever been camp Benson before?it is called Kawau island really.
Kawau Island is a fun Island with rare creatures such as Wekas,Orcas,kiwi birds,wallabies,and stingrays.On our first day we did the killer hill.It was a tiring adventure,but we got there.After our Killer hill we had lunch,at the park.We had free time skipping rocks playing on the park obviously and other things.After our playing time we walked over back the other side,again to our cabins.My cabin was number 54.My partners were filipe hopa and nytram.
On the next day we had gotten woken up at 7 o'clock am from Mr Jacobsen with his bugle.Our first thing we done was the run.Then we had done our first activity,it was bivouacing.We built a very very big house and our whole team could fit in.Teea our caregiver had to pour a whole bucket of water on our house and none of us got wet.
On our last day we had done Swimming bush cricket and baseball.I would like to thank all the helpers for looking after us and helping with the activities.What my favourite part was kayaking because we went to survivor island and it was 4 km.We searched the island while eating oysters. It was yummy.
Task description we are writing a recount about our year 6 camp at kawau island it was a fun and exciting adventure find out what we done by reading my story.